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why this ff has to be so sad again?
anyway i like this ff, too.
hope that janne will survive this accident...

I'm glad that you like it. I've added some more. The fiction is not that sad

sure if a person died thats sad...
janne is alive and jukka died- that's not nice of you.
i hope that he will get over it someday

yes, you're right.
I should stop killing people in my stories

here is some more.

maybe, but otherwise...
i guess this will be very very interesting
the girl and the wolf

I wanted to try the adventure style in stead of the drama.
I had some crazy ideas and mix them to create that story :D

Here are some more.

what they have no idea what ski jumping is????? oh my god
he's a good ski jumper but a very bad hunter
the ceremony upset me a bit. what it was going exactly?

Yes, there are some funny parts And I hardly imagine such people knowing about waht's ski jumping. A secret weapon

To write the ceremony part I went to an orthodox monastery in Carelia and I described what I saw. I didn't understand what was going on and I thought that can be the perfect reaction of 2 foreigners in that culture. I didn't spend time to learn Orthodox culture to add an answer. I'm not passionate enough by the subject

me,too

wow, i have no idea what i shall say... this is always getting exciting

I will not let you wait any longer

Here are some more. Enjoy.

yes, i did.
i guess the story take place where the USSR still existed
maybe something like time travel? or a dream?

You'll have soon the answer :D

i can't wait
it seems like an happy end

it's coming :D

perfect!!
great story, however

Oh thank you so much I'm glad that you like it.

sure, why not maybe next time a story with havu as a second character

I took some risks: to write a fiction in a country where I don't know much about it, to change style (from drama to adventure), to add some fantasy (the story with the village and the girl in the woods) and to write a short story.

Something is sure: no more stories with Ahonen. He was already the main character in 4 of my 5 stories.

I was planning to write the next one with Harri. He is an interesting person. Havu, it will be quite difficult because I don't know much about him. But I can try. And why not as second character.

But before that, the most important, I need a topic. The main idea of the new fiction.

why you need to know so much from havu or arttu to write a story? i mean it's fiction. you can write whatever you wanted...

maybe a story like "shutter island"? with havu and arttu

ui, about harri. yeah, this will be a great fiction i guess