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sure; I did. but i hope that this plan will go well

You are on the right track

Here is the next part of the planning Havu is a serious guy

poor matti. havu should let him go from jail

hehe you are worse than me

i know

oh this will be so interessting can't wait for the next part

I put a lot of effort in this chapter. I wanted to end the case in a proper way. Enjoy the next part

that was good seems to be that everything goes well

Yes, until now there is no problem. Will it last?

And now: action

oh, I knew it and havu is not there

Yep Havu can't help physically. But he is doing his best from the radio

OMG! how was this interessting
More!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I'm so happy that you like it

Here is more just for you. Enjoy

thanks
harri is a ghost?
matti was not shoot down by this russian man? because he smiled

yes, Harri is a ghost But nobody knew it before.

The Russian shot on Matti and looked at him with this smile like a satisfaction.

you can't do this...
and what is harri's role now?
how many chapters are still to come?

I know, I'm bad. But it was the price to pay to solve this case.

You will know more about Harri at the end of this chapter. After this part, 4 chapters are left. 2 are quite big and 2 are small. Well 15 pages alltogether.

just 4 oh no

and what will tami do? maybe harri will help him?

All good things come to an end I could write this story for ever but I prefer to end it before it comes boring.

Tami will just live his life. There will nnot be any more communications between them because Harri is definitively gone.

The next chapter is only with Havu.

what does it mean "only with havu"? it's great just one chapter with havu
he don't want to work anymore? he and maria could be come together again

You like Havu chapter? That's good because the next one is also with him