Feedback: "Finnish stories: hypocrisy and selfishness"

Hello dear readers

the 5th part of the saga is finally ready. I hope that you'll like it.

I did some little changes to please all of you. Arttu Lappi is now one of the main characters , The Kroisos is still in the story. Anssi Koivuranta is also still here even if his role is small. And Olli Muotka is the new comer in the story.

Don't hesitate to tell me what you think. Also negative comments.

I'm waiting for your comments and I've to say that it's still fun to write this saga

New ideas are also welcome

what shall I say????????


i don't unterstand tiia... maybe she's looking so good 'cause she thought she will see rane- maybe she wants him back??

hehhehe I like your guesses inspector Sanni

here is the next part of that chapter.

harri can see matti, too? or hear him??????????

i could understand rane, if he didn't want to go back...... too much was happened

Harri is so mysterious. It's almost impossible to know what he sees or hear. You'll have more details in another chapter.

You're right for Janne. But he will not be away for a long time. I like him too much

new chapter

oh, havu he's so cute and a great, lovely father

and where is the master of law??????

rane and his bar- will see how it works

I really like the character of Havu. He is the good "connection" between all the characters. He is also the only one to be normal Maybe I've been too kind with him

The master in law is back in the next chapter which is quite funny. But before, the end of this chapter.

NOOOOOOOOOOO, you're NOT too kind to him- he's great and perfect- and a NON-SMOKER

you can't do this- no arttu cannot wait till tonight

great chapter, no more to say

Thanks

Here is the chapter with Arttu but also with much of the others. I hope that you'll have a lot of fun

sure it was great and funny to read...
thanks for that chapter

You're welcome. I've to say that it's difficult to write a funny chapter that doesn't sound ridiculous.

Here is the second part of the chapter

some pills at the cocktail?

Mouhahahaha Who knows?

The next chapter is based on 2 true stories who happened to me. You will probably don't believe it. It was in the train from Helsinki to Tampere and on the boat from Turku to Mariehamn. I just replaced the "idiots" in the train and the band on the boat by... you'll see Have fun.

arttu as a manager not that bad but I prefer him as a lawer and with a suit

OMG I have no idea what I shall write about it...

He just manage the band because the others are really lazy and messy It's a hobby. It's not his main job. Luckily

The train trip was funny ^^ At least I will remember it all my life. And the trip to Tampere is 2.5 hours long. These guys never stopped. Well this chapter is a bit useless but after the tain and boat trip I thought that it had to be in the story

Here is the second part. The boat. Enjoy

arttu... he take this a bit too seriously?? but I can understand him. this band will never make it
he's a lawyer- maybe that's the reason, he doesn't know what "just for fun" is

the grannies are great vielleicht haben sie das nicht verstanden, weil sie schon schwerhörig oder fast taub sind und es deshalb für gut befunden haben

And Arttu is not like the others. He grew up.

Here is the show on the boat I lived and I was trying already there to imagine the Kroisos playing in front of that audience: http://a4.sphotos.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos- ... 9724_n.jpg

Well this chapter was a total delirum. Now, let's go back to the "normal" life.

maybe a little bit too much? er sollte wieder so unbeschollten sein wie früher und nicht so ernst...aber der ehrgeiz soll auf jedenfall beleiben-gerade das zeichnet arttu aus

that pic is good

poor harri- hope that he will be fine as fast as he can...

It's what I like with Arttu. He is not like the other guys.

Harri is little by little making progress. And he knows more than many people think. You'll see in a couple of chapters who will be his new friend

Now a new chapter with Havu

harri get a friend- a dog maybe? I guess it's tami

finns and alcohol oh, havu