Feedback: "Finnish stories: hypocrisy and selfishness"

I hope it for you anyway--->
maybe sth with is little daughter?

you'll see But it's true that the 2 last chapters I wrote are quite tough for him.

Now, it's sure: they will be a 7th part Because I already wrote 29 pages and I'm far from the end of the saga.

poor havu please be not too bad with him

this couldn't be better

when will you be finished the 6th part??

I guess quite soon. Some chapters are not finished and I still have to add some intermediate chapters with some side characters (Anssi, Vellu, Ville). Plus at least one with Arttu and one with Rane. I think that Havu suffered enough in this part

I still have to find a title

I would help you to find a title but I have no idea what part 6 is about or how the story goes on 'cause of this it's your turn

Let's say that the story is much darker than the previous parts. Some people are dying, some are cheating, some are murdered. And some are happy At least one

"the dark side of..."
"cruel friendships" ---> I have no idea
"between fears and happiness"

I'm too bad at those things

I'll see. In general I find the title during the writing if I notice that a topic or a word appear during the whole text. Maybe when I'll read again the whole text I'll find. But I was think of something with "dark" or "cold". Let's wait and see. This is not urgent. First I've to finish the writing.

"cold as ice" you'll find a better one. surprise me with a great title

what a difficult mission I'll do my best

I'm happy. I wrote a good chapter with the Kroisos guys

what's with "fear of the dark" it's a title from a Iron Maiden song..........

It can fit. Let's see.

I'm writing a chapter about Arttu I try to do it as romantic as possible (not too sweet of course) but I'm not really good in that kind of writing I hope that you will like it anyway.

I think you are romantic enough to write this as good as possible
and yes, I will like it

I like weekends when the weather is bad. So, I can write my story

I'm almost finished. I've to write a proper final, add at least 2 little chapters and then check the whold text.

And to find a title

thanks to the weather in suomi

you'll find a good title- I'm sure

The writing is finished. I've to read through the text and correct all the mistakes. Maybe I'll add another chapter if it's needed. There are few little stories around the big one. It's very dark and some chapters are... not at all for young people. Well... it's enough for today. I'll continue tomorrow and who knows: maybe the first chapter will be online

And yes I found the title: Ghosts from the past

can't wait

yes, the title sounds good

I read the first 6 chapters. I'll try to finish tonight. Today I was busy and I didn't work on the text.