Feedback: "Finnish stories: ghosts from the past"

Hello dear readers!

I had a lot of fun (again ) to write this sixth part which is darker and more mysterious than the others. Some characters will suffer. But not everthing is dark. Arttu will bring some light

Anyway. I'm looking for your feedback.

The first chapter starts right after the last chapter of the 5th part.

Don't hesitate to tell me if the story becomes... bad, insane, too crazy,...

what shall I say? the beginning is great

poor tiia

hope that harri will be fine... but i think this would not happen

I'm really happy that you like the beginning Let's see if you like the next chapters.

Hehehe you know me quite well

The chapter 2 is long and I cut it in 2. Here is the first part. Enjoy

that's why arttu's dog was whining- 'cause of harri. at first i thought it was his daughter

nina is a beast she shall go away- forever and never come back

arttu will help tami- he promised

I can't kill Arttu's daughter now!

Yep, Nina is a horrible person and you'll see what else she is capable of. It will be hard to get rid of her

Arttu is a real friend and keep his promises.

And here is the second part of the chapter.

you shall let suvi alive!!! she's like arttu

da musste wohl havu erkennen, dass arttu voller überraschungen steckt

maybe nina could have an car accident and never come back

It's really how I could imagine his daughter. But don't worry. I will not be bad with her

I really like Havu and Arttu and I played a lot with them. They both have their secrets and want to know them. It's one of the topics of that part.

I really like Nina. She is the perfect bad person. But is she so bad?

I just read quickly the next chapter to check once more if there is no mistake and I post it.

secrets?? i think this could be funny...

you can let nina alive, if harri's ghost is torture her

suvi is so cute... now her proud father is able too learn how to take care of a little baby. thought that she lives in arttu's mansion
typicall havu. suvi is not there for tidy up. she will make a very good job


tiia will find a new rich man who will spend all the money to her

mouhahahah

I like Havu. He is so conservative ^^

I guess that you will like the Havu-Arttu chapters. No, Suvi is living with her mother (I had to do it because she wasn't present in the previous parts of the story... sorry...).

You have great ideas for Nina

Well... it was the chapter I liked less. But it was necessary.

The next one is really special and I had to read some articles on the subject. Let's see if you like it. It's an Anssi chapter.

poor anssi... the next one who lost a lovely person
du bist unmöglich

maybe there's a chance that suvi can move to arttu

maybe one chapter more

I know, I'm bad

I read quickly the next one and I post it. It will be a Lindström chapter.

thank you...

kimi and the rabbit

Almost

that kid is so..........
there's nothing more what I could say

You're right. This kid is a little monster. A real one.

Do you want to read a new chapter? The next one is lighter and with Arttu

arttuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu yes, please

Okay It's coming

poor arttu
maybe he's too sexy for woman's world

You are maybe right But don't worry. He will look soon for another one I keep my promise