Feedback: "Finnish stories: lies and betrayals"

stupid wife
but this will be a part for arttu, isn't it?

Of course Arttu will have a lot of work in the next story

And now it's really the end... here is the last chapter.

than i have to wait till the next story beginns...
arttu should be the singer for the kroisos. but this is not possible 'cause he has a lot too do *more arttu *
will see what harri mean... seems to be very very spannend

the end is perfect

thanks a lot for sharing

The last chapter is always fun to write and the last words are the most important. It's the open door to the next part and it must be interesting and fascinating.

I'm so happy that you like it You are my best reader because you give good feedbacks and I take them into account when I'm writing.

For the next part I've to think a bit more about Arttu and not just to use him as lawyer and in the Kroisos band. He diserves to be a real friend in the story. Maybe with Havu

I've to say that the secret of Nina is the core of the saga.

The paranoamal and almost science fiction will come to the next part (don't worry there will not be people coming from another galaxy). Here there was only kind of witches and a ghost. But it's nothing compared to what will happen

Like previously I'll write here how is the writing going on.

Thanks again for reading the saga and all your comments.

mehr arttu ist immer gut. vielleicht könnte seine tochter bei havu auf die kleine ana aufpassen. dadurch könnte eventuell eine sehr gute und tiefe freundschaft zwischen den beiden entstehen. ich denke über die kinder würde es einfacher laufen
ich finde auch, dass arttu nicht nur mit seinen jura-büchern eine beziehung haben sollte

matti würde ich als ghost weiter beibehalten, die idee fand ich sehr super. matti könnte weiter tipps geben...

naja und nina müsste eigentlich verschwinden

kurze frage: als du in kuopio warst, hast du die weiße kirche von innen gefilmt. wäre es möglich, dass du mir das video zuschicken könntest. die kirche sah von innen richtig klasse aus

you make me blush
deine ff ist ganz anders als die anderen- speziel, aber super gut

Gute Ideen!

Schreib mir deine email addresse in eine PN und ich schicke dir das Video.

Ich habe nicht viele andere FF gelesen weil mein Deutsch ist nicht gut genug zu lesen 50 Word Seiten. Aber ich habe gehört dass viele Leuten magen nicht die deutsche Fiktionen weil es ist zu oft Slash und dumme love Stories. Ich kann leider nicht sagen weil ich habe nur 4-5 Geschichte gelesen.

sorry for writing the text above in german, but this in english would take too much time

yes, but that's right. what you've written about german ff some ff are good- the most are just

thank you so much for sending you have a mail

Don't worry. I understood what you wrote

The file is too big for the email I'll try to find another solution. Otherwise I can post it on youtube and you can download it.

over facebook-pn...

but sometimes when i wrote in english this can be a missunderstanding

The file is 70MB. It's quite big...

Try to download the video: https://rapidshare.com/files/457822701/MVI_2401.AVI

Your english is really good

thanks I've the video now

kiitos, but my english was better and it could be better again

You're welcome

Next time I'll go to Kuopio I'll take a video outside.

You just need to practise. Like me with my German

kuopio is beautiful or? and don't forgett the pictures and the skijump

because of this i spend my holidays in not-speaking-german countries

For me Kuopio is one of the most beautiful Finnish cities. The problem is that it's in the middle of nowhere and it takes 5 hours of train ffrom Helsinki to go there.

Here are some pictures of the city in winter: http://club.ados.fr/ptitpou4/kuopio-03- ... hotos.html
In summer at the hills. http://club.ados.fr/ptitpou4/veikkaus-t ... hotos.html
In May and summer: http://club.ados.fr/ptitpou4/kuopio-2355/photos.html

i want to be there

and by plain? aber zu teuer nehme ich an

Plane is very expensive... more than 150€. With the train it's 100€.

that's a reason to take the train...
but with train you can see the beautiful landscape of suomi

the pics are great aber du hast havu vernachlässigt märz 2009 in kuopio just one pic

you're right. Train is great. I've never took the plane inside Finland because I've 50% discount on the train tickets.

Thanks. Havu is not easy to take in picture when he is not "supposed" to be there. I was lucky

also war das von havu eher zufall das er da war aber der junge ist so skisprung verrückt, er lässt alles stehen und liegen wenn die anderen finnen in kuopio springen

the people in kuopio are they different like in espoo or helsinki?
die chathedral of kuopio is really beautiful. good place for a wedding

I think that Havu was recovering from his tight bone which was broken the previous summer in Klingenthal. He is so unlucky...

Yeah the cathedral is really nice. Usually it's closed but when I took the video it was open because a guy was playing the piano. It was nice. Jussi got married there and maybe habu and Matti in a close future