Feedback: "Finnish stories: lies and betrayals"

no more to say too jussi- he's sick...

die haben echt nichts besseres zu tun! unglaublich!! armes havu. ich hoffe,wenn das raus kommt, kann das geklärt werden. ich denke, die mädels sind neidisch auf die beiden...einfach nur neidisch

Ah lonely women... you'll see later what they will do with that picture. But I think that you already now

The next chapter is the most violent/sad/unfair/mad. Do you want to read it now or tomorrow?

Yesterday the weather was great and I went to Käpylä. I wanted to find the green house of Havu and on the other side of the road the red house of Vellu. There are really plenty of red houses. But it was more difficult to find the green ones. I walked in all the streets and I found only one green house with a red one on the other side of the road. And guess what? The green house had two doors!

Here is the picture (there is a little street between the houses): http://images.ados.fr/sport/photo/hd/80 ... 6601f0.jpg

If you want to see other pictures from Käpylä: http://club.ados.fr/ptitpou4/helsinki-n ... hotos.html

I will probably go again when spring will start. With flowers it will be beautiful.

ich würde das dann lieber heute abend nach der arbeit weiter lesen wollen

die bilder sind fantastisch geworden und dort war ich auch fast überall in helsinki

Danke Generell mage ich gern in Helsinki spazieren aber nicht wo alle Touristen gehen. Es gibt so viele wunderschöne Orten.

Zum Beispiel, hier ist die Strand von Herttoniemi die war sehr oft in Finnish stories 3: http://images.ados.fr/divers/photo/hd/8 ... 933b06.jpg

All the descriptions of places I have in that saga are true. If you want to see a place/building/cemetery, just tell me and I post a picture. If you want more info about a restaurant, club,... what ever, feel free to ask. As you know I always try to make my stories as close from the reality as possible. I've also been to crap places such as Sörnäinen or Vuosaari (in one of the last chapters of this story).

Here is the terrible chapter.

das möchte ich dir nicht antun, da könnest du nur die bilder posten

ich weiß gar nicht, was ich zu dem kapitel sagen soll das ist einfach schrecklich

Okay. I'll make a list of the places in the saga and I'll update pictures. And next time you are going to Helsinki you can have a special "Finnish stories" sightseeing

Yeah really terrible chapter...

Here is the next one which is much lighter.

aber dann bist du bitte meine persönliche "Finnish stories" sightseeing-begleiterin

bin mir nicht sicher,ob er das halten kann- ein guter junge zu bleiben oder erstmal zu werden

Why not I've create a map with all the places I remember. I think that it's quite interesting. But for example I'm unable to remember where I "put" the houses of Harri and Tami... shame on me. I think that I'll read the stories and I'll complete the map. Here you can see it: http://sabi-fictions.jimdo.com/about-th ... h-stories/

Ah Ville

Here is the next chapter with Havu.

the map is so great kiitos

havu, einfach ein toller freund. stellt seine bedürfnisse hinten an, um jemanden zu helfen
wenn ich das richtig verstanden habe, wird es cassandra nicht mehr geben, oder?

Du hast richtig verstanden.

I think that you'll like the next chapter

if havu knew who killed her... and a new job for arttu. maybe he is defending jussi or?
mini-happonen on the way

sure i like that chapter i like every chapter you wrote

Oh thank you ^^ Yep, Arttu will have some work.

The mini-Havu was one of your wishes

Here is the second part of the chapter.

und wieder mal ein dickes danke, dass du mir wieder einen wunsch erfüllt hast

armes havu. das hätte er sich bestimmt anders vorgestellt bin schon gespannt, wie arttu mit der geschichte um geht... und wie der master of law sich entscheiden wird- von der rechtssprechung her

It's always difficult to be realistic when you write a story. I mean that I have no scientist, medical, investigation, law,... background and skills. I've to make a lot of research to "cover" my ignorance in some areas. For the police work it's relatively easy because I watch a lot of police series at TV. But I've never been fan of law... there is a chapter where you will see Arttu working but maybe it's totally wrong... and to find info is really difficult because the law texts are very boring... And it's very difficult to find the answers in the Finnish law. For example with the hertitage, I took the Swiss law that I studied and I found relatively easily the info. Maybe it's totally different for Finland. The other difficulty in that saga is to describe the job of Harri and his wife. I've to invente a lot and it's maybe totally wrong too. For all the medical aspects I check on the Internet or I ask my friend who is nurse in Finland. But for Matti and the finance, everything is true. I've been to a private bank and entered in a dealing room. I talked with the employees and I know a bit how it works. For Tami also. I worked in the IT of a bank. For Vellu, Rane and Jussi, it's very normal jobs and there is nothing complicated.

Here is the next chapter.

ich frage mich auch, wie arttu jura studieren konnte- das ist vom thema so trocken...
egal, ob du davon ahnung hast oder nicht- ich finde es toll, wie du schreibst und wie du dich darauf vorbereitest

naja, hätte nicht gedacht, das mico auf seinen vater hört wo ist dr haken bei der ganzen sache??

It's cool that you like how I write. Sometimes I'm 100% in my delirium and I don't know if it's understandable or not ^^

I've 2 friends who are studying law and when they are talking about it they are very excited and it seems to be the most interesting subject at the university... Maybe Arttu is the same...

Ah Mico... immer einen dummen Teenager.

And now another terrible chapter.

oh gott, das ist doch so dumm und blöde von den damen... nur weil sie keine glückliche ehe führen zerstören sie havu seine. ich hoffe, dass sich das ganz schnell irgendwie aufklärt und dass, das baby von havu ist- was es ja auch sein wird!?

Ah these women... but luckily Arttu is here

you'll see a bit later what will happen between Havu, Rane, Vellu and the women.

Here is a new chapter.

arttu
he'll make it- i'm sure