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NOOO, arttu's daughter could do that job to get some pocket money and arttu could be havu's new best friend that's good, or?

That's a good idea. Do you know her name? If not you can choose it

from arttu's daughter? suvi, aina, leonie(-elina), finja... suvi and leonie(-elina) are my faves

It's perfect. In the story she is 12 years old in 2026. The perfect age to do some babysitting. Thanks a lot for the idea. I've to admit that I forgot the daughter... I will choose Suvi as name.

Only 2 chapters are left. Enjoy that one with Arttu

you're welcome
how could you forget his daughter

reading now the next chapter

I've to admit that now the saga is huge and it's difficult to remember everything (who said what, the secrets, the lies,...) and there are a lot of characters and also many that were not planned.

what just one chapter and the 5th part is over?

these dead kids are harri's one? please not

Yes, it's true. Only one chapter is left. But I will read it carefully once more because there are a lot of very important elements for the 6th part.

I don't know if you remember the first chapter of the second part when the jumpers met on the island of Harri. It's Havu who discovered the little cemetary with the teddy bears and the names on stones.

no, i don't remember. thanks for that. too sad...

that's a bit the problem of long stories. You forget details. Also for the author

Yeah this is really sad.

your story could be soooooooooooo long... i'll love it
it's so different an' so great

when comes the last chapter?

Thank you so much! I hope that this part was not too boring. It was the second longest (the longest was part 3 with the death of Matti).

I think that nobody else has such a sick brain than me

I finish my dinner and then I read is once more. I think that I'll post it within an hour. Two maximum.

no, no, no, no chapter is boring. it's interesting, exciting, fascinating...

2hours waiting?? please not

for the 6th part- arttu need a wife, he cannot be alone- he's 42 now. he doesn't deserve to be alone

yes, you are right.

I love your adjectives to qualify the fiction

I can already tell you that the story turns more dramatic (yes, some characters will die) and strange (what after the ghost you might think? ). You'll have a sample in the last chapter

hehe, with a little help from a dictionary

okay..... that means that arttu get a wife?

nina will die, maybe harri too 'cause nina killed him
havu and arttu are best friends... the daughters, too

matti comes back

ok, I'll wait till the last one comes

good guesses For Arttu I still don't know. But I'll think about it.

Here is the first part of the last chapter.

what are you doing? that seems to be interesting
marie is a little bit naive because of her friend nina

oh, please. the sexiest lawyer alive can't be alone

Maria is honest and a good person. She is naive because she thinks that everybody is good like her.

Okay, okay. I'll take care of Arttu

I'm doing something totally crazy and I think that nobody else wrote a story about it

Enjoy the last part

some people are dying i would say...
this is a finish can't wait for the next part 6
just great...

nina

I always try to have interesting finish to captivate the reader and give her/him the envy to read the next part after some weeks or months of waiting.

Yep, you can already see here that the story becomes... surrealistic. Well I hope that it will not be too strange and ruin the whole saga.

Nina is the crazy scientist without compassion and feelings. She is like a robot and she is playing with everybody in her life for her own profit.