Feedback: "Finnish stories: ghosts from the past"

i think he's dead now????

yes, he is... I told you that I killed a lot of people in that part.

Here is the second part of the chapter. I'll post the third one after a shower

poor havu...
why he's going to nina??? maria will be not amused

Yeah, at the moment, Havu is lucky. But how long?

The next chapter is more refreshing and relax. I hope that you will like it. There is all the caracters if I'm not wrong.

Enjoy the first part

poor anssi I'm so sorry for him

how could havu be happy when he's going always to THAT monster what do you mean with "how long"?

I guess that you'll like the end of the chapter

Havu always had an excuse for his visits to Nina. But maybe once Maria will discover what he really does.

yes, you were right

now anssi as an aim and that's good...

maybe nina wants to ruin the marriage of happonen

no girl could be too beautiful for arttu

You're right. Nina is not honest and she wants always what she can't have. She is also really jealous and selfish.

Here is a chapter with her and Havu.

After this chapter, there is only one left.

you should run away now...
i think the last chapter of this will not make my mood even better

I hate her
how he could do this hope that maria will leave him. she doesn't deserve a guy like this one even if he's havu

I'm very far away. Can you see me?

I was sure that you will react that way

Yep, Nina is the bad person of the story. What will she do next?

You will have to wait to part 7 to know exactly what's going on.

I will not publish tonight the last chapter. I've to read it carefully because it is very important for the part 7. And Arttu is an important character in the last chapter

Here is the first part of the last chapter

and yes, i still can see you...

havu makes her pregnant please don't do this
suvi could be a spy at happonen's house aybe she find sth out. this could help her father and tami
satan- it's getting always better nina is sick... so sick that she needs help--> mental hospital

please let you time with part 7... you can't post it when i'm in holiday

Havu is a mystery. Is he honest? What is he really doing? Is he a good or a bad guy? That's the enigma of the saga

Nina is definitively sick. You'll see what will happen to her.

I don't think that I will be fast enough to publish the 7th part during your holiday. I still didn't write a line and I prefer to take my time to finish properly the saga. And soon the Finnjumping Cup is starting

Here is the second part of the chapter.

1. havu is not really honest- I would say
2. he has changed- not in a good way; thanks to nina for her perfect manipulation
3. maria is too naive, too trusting. she has to read between the line when havu tells her stories 'bout him and nina
4. I think arttu is the only honest person

part 6 is over now, i guess?? it's sadly but I can't wait for part 7. it becomes more and more interesting, darker, more mysterious...

what shall I say now? the same like ever: and sometimes

for finnjumping cup: don't forget the havu-pics for me when he jumps. I have no idea how he's still looking

It's not yet over There is still the very last part.

I like your remarks. It really shows that you get what I wrote. (sometimes I'm not sure if it's understandable ).

Thank you so much for all your comments

And now, the really last part of "Ghosts from the past". Enjoy

oh, sorry

thanks for the bloody end
arttu is alone now... and I think havu is not a very good help for discover nina's secret Somehow I have the feeling that sth will happen to havu (and maybe to his family) and that will be hurtfull but he must accept the consequences from his behavior- dealing with nina but maria could be arttu's partner in that case but it's dangerous.
as it seems, everyone is in danger who will discover nina's machinations- poor arttu. he as to be more carefully now. is it not better to put a detective on nina this would be much safer for everyone...maria, arttu, suvi, ana

If I wouldn't understand I would ask you once more. but it's very understandable

It's okay. I didn't say clearly that I cut the chapter in 3 parts.

Yep, Arttu is alone and has to be careful. Will he be the next victim? But does he really want to know what is she doing?

You're right. Havu is playing with the fire. Let's see what will happen to him.

I just go some really good ideas for the first chapter. I think that I will start the writting before to forget everything.

no, arttu can't be the next victim
nina could be jealous of maria. she has a husband and a kid- a real family, nina not. so it can be that maria is the next one

that's a good idea

you know when I'm writing, very often I come back here and I read your wishes and guesses Some of them are coming true. Maybe it will happen.