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Okay, let's go. Here is the first part of this chapter.

does she manipulate havu???
he must help arttu...

Of course she manipulates Otherwise Havu would help.

Here is the second part of the chapter. Don't kill me

nooooooo....
he can't do this to his family. but he hasn't an affair with that blondie

There is maybe another explanation But maybe he is really cheating

Here is the end of the chapter.

run away so fast as you can

hope for you that you're far far away
i think havu need help from a real friend- arttu

I go away!!!! Don't beat me!!!

I was sure that you would be angry

But I'll surprise you (I hope) and you will probably kill me a couple of more times

and 'cause of this you have an other one

Okay, okay.

I hope that you will like it. It's an Arttu chapter

so cute he found a girl an a cooking course hopefully forever
what will suvi say??

I'm so happy that you like it For me it was the most difficlut chapter to write.

Well you'll see what will happen with his new couple but you will have to wait for the 7th part... Here I really focused on the main topic to don't write a never ending story. But this means that they stay together for a long time

this was pretty good
but let them both stay together in 7th part

Thank you

I promise

you're welcome

so, i will dismiss you know

Okay. It was nice talking and I'm happy that you like the story so far even if I'm bad with Havu. Thank you

Tomorrow I'm going to Lahti. I don't know if I'll be online in the evening.

I can already teel you that the next chapter is bloody

bloody is good
have fun in lathi

and thanks for sharing your story

You're welcome

You like blood... hum interesting Let's see if the next chapter is bloody enough

You read 33 Word pages

And only 4 chapters are left.

I should think a bit and start soon the writing of the 7th part

wow, so many pages?? oho
i think the 4 chapters we made this week

with 7th part you have time I'm in holiday from 15.7 for one week- so let you all the time you need

Here is the first part of the chapter 11. Enjoy... well I don't know if I can say it for this chapter