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tiia was it. she planed it
sth was written in a chapter before

please not a sad chapter anymore

I haven't been too bad I've to admit. Tiia and her master plans Nice try

The chapter is not over yet even if this part could be part of another chapter. Anyway. Here it comes!

janne is single? why that? cause of the dead?
did i get sth wrong? i thought his older daughter died but she's not the future child

tiia is like nina -->

Yes, well he is not single but widower. But for Tiia, it's the same. Leena was his wife who was more than 20 years younger than him. He doesn't have a daughter. It was his other son, Milo who died some years ago (before the ski jumper meeting in Norway).

The next chapter looks a lot like this end of this one (too much in my opinion... scenario mistake...)

no it was ok. don't worry

maria is such a nice person and havu didn't see it
how old ana is? 2years?

No, she is almost 5. She was born in December 2023 (I wrote it on a piece of paper to remember )

Yep, Havu is blind.

Mr Havu is back in the following part of the chapter

taking care of garden and the cars. oh, havu

tiia shall let him in peace

one last chapter for today?

Havu is really disconnected

Sure and enjoy. It's almost the end

the end of this whole part?

ana has nothing to do with it. poor little girl
hope that havu and maria will be happy as soon as possible

yep. There is the end of this chapter and 2 full chapters left and the part 7 is ended. The good news is that 9 pages of the part 8 are already written and next week I've holiday. And... it will rain!

Of course Ana has nothing to do in the problems of her parents but she doesn't understand everything.

wow, part 7 nearly finished

how could havu be so stupid and cruel? please let them find a way to stay together

I'm not finished with his couple I love to play with them. At the moment Havu is upset.

Next chapter is with Havu.

I hope it for you

cute

I needed a chapter like this before the final. Are you ready to read what you are waiting for since the first quarrel between Nina and Harri in the Part 2 (Changes are needed)? The secret of Nina. Enjoy because it's the last part (but it's quite long )

exciting can't wait for the secret...
harri is alive

hehhehe nice guess.

Here is the following part.

wow. but i would say that this 'lauri' is harri but i'm not sure

well done

Thank you :) Yep, maybe it's Harri

New part!

or harri was never dead... and all is a lie

That's also a possibiliy

More? Enjoy the last part