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Betreff des Beitrags: Re: Feedback: "Finnish stories: Broken Hearts"

Verfasst: Mo 5. Dez 2011, 15:33

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Here is another sample with the master of law:

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“We promised to be always there for our friends. In the best and worst moments. We failed with Matti and Harri. We won’t fail with you. You have to know that you are a member of that family. We are here to help you. Don’t stay alone and destroy your life how you did recently. Talk to us and we’ll do our best,” the lawyer explained.

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Betreff des Beitrags: Re: Feedback: "Finnish stories: Broken Hearts"

Verfasst: Di 6. Dez 2011, 08:45

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thanks

is he talking to havu? :gruebel:

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Betreff des Beitrags: Re: Feedback: "Finnish stories: Broken Hearts"

Verfasst: Di 6. Dez 2011, 09:23

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That was too easy for you :lol:

I'm finishing an important chapter. Then I've to write a proper end and the main story is done. I will just add few little chapters at the end because there is only the main story. There will be at least one with the band. This story is the longest I ever wrote. I've already 72 pages! I hope that it's not too much.

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Betreff des Beitrags: Re: Feedback: "Finnish stories: Broken Hearts"

Verfasst: Di 6. Dez 2011, 10:35

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no, it's not too much :mrgreen:

that's good :hupf:

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Betreff des Beitrags: Re: Feedback: "Finnish stories: Broken Hearts"

Verfasst: Di 6. Dez 2011, 20:33

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That's good. I don't need to cut some parts :nut:

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Betreff des Beitrags: Re: Feedback: "Finnish stories: Broken Hearts"

Verfasst: Mi 7. Dez 2011, 15:51

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Betreff des Beitrags: Re: Feedback: "Finnish stories: Broken Hearts"

Verfasst: Di 10. Jan 2012, 18:03

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I'm back to writing. This story is so long. It's a bit scary. I hope that I'll miss nothing important. I've written an epilogue to end nicely the story. I hope that you'll like it.

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Betreff des Beitrags: Re: Feedback: "Finnish stories: Broken Hearts"

Verfasst: Mi 11. Jan 2012, 21:24

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Little sample from the epilogue:

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Matti was right. I lived the longest. I spent these long years with him. First it was hard to live with him but then I got used to it. I preferred to have him as a friend than as an enemy. But maybe you are interested to know what happened to the group of friends and their family?

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Betreff des Beitrags: Re: Feedback: "Finnish stories: Broken Hearts"

Verfasst: Do 12. Jan 2012, 09:20

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great

can't wait :mrgreen:

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