Feedback: "Finnish stories: lies and betrayals"

Hello dear readers

I'm waiting for your comments.

Don't hesitate to criticize or to say if something is wrong, you don't like...

For Sanni: You'll see that Arttu will appear more often in the story even if he is not a main character.

Finally I didn't use the special igredent ^^ I keep it for the 5th part but there will be enough "special-strange" ingredients ^^

Zuletzt geändert von Ptitpou am Di 12. Apr 2011, 15:27, insgesamt 1-mal geändert.

yes, thank you so much
the beginnen is really sad
harri has no repect
good chapter

Thanks

Yeah I had to start with the funerals as "meeting" for the friends.
I like Harri a lot because he is very different. He is rational and not emotive. He doesn't follow the same rules as the others.

Here is the next part of that chapter which is a bit longer than the others.

and sad again
poor havu- now he realized that matti is not alive anymore....
please go on soon

yes, sure. Here is immediately a new part (it's the end of the chapter 1)

Matti is dead

Harri is a jerk but ok, everyone has another type to mourn. Havu is so sweet, he is like a tower of strength.
I'm very impressed and be nosy how the story goes on.

Ptitpou

I'm glad that you like the beginning

yeah Matti is definitively gone...

Let's finish this sad day with Harri

matti nun ist es endgültig

oh, da wird sich harris frau aber umgucken, wenn er das ernst meint

The terrible couple Who will win the final battle?

New chapter with Havu and Jussi.

jussi matti is gone sure, but he will be there in his heart...
i always thought that arttu is havu's best friend poor arttu
bin gespannt, ob have das tagebuch liest

i think harri will win the final battle

But you know, maybe Arttu will become again Havu's best friend They just need more chapters together

Jussi is reacting strangely but some people do it. I remember after the death of an uncle of my mother, all his children wanted to get rid of everything to move on. And few years ago they regretted. Nothing was left except their memories. But soon Jussi will have a bad surprise

Here is a new chapter.

that's great for rane
can't wait to read more

I'm not always bad with Rane But will to last

Now, one of my favorite chapters

matti is so great
he hated havu??? unbelievable if havu knows it...
i think jussi will go to havu and ask him some questions- i guess. maybe havu was getting some money and you didn't wrote it down??

this was really the best chapter till now

It was the first part of this chapter. I post in few seconds the second half.

I really liked Matti during this saga and because he is not physically present anymore, it was a good way to have him back.

I think that in the last chapter of Finnish stories 2 when Havu said to Matti that he should go to rehab, Matti is not really happy about it. But the verb to hate is a bit exaggerated.

Now Jussi is really angry and wants to discover who gets the money. Will he finds out?

he just need the money for drugs! hope he'll never get a penny.

arttu maybe this was so good from arttu to tell this jussi? i don't know...

Arttu is honest. That's the difference between them. He thinks that he just helps a friend who understand nothing to law.

hope you're right

You'll see already in the next chaper which will be online in few minutes