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thaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaank you sooooooooo much

first I must tell you that I considered it remarkable that you still continue to write FF, even though I'm at the only one who read your story at moment- it seems to be.

I hope Havu does not make me speechless too much, otherwise it looks bad with comments
Dr Happonen... this was the best. Once again, I would love to see his face as he frantically called harri
I find Havu should get an Oscar- for his endless facial expression, so great and funny

Since one year people seem to don't be interested anymore in this forum. They are all on Facebook or on the skispringen.com forum. In my opinion it's a pity. This forum was so great when I joined it in 2005 until let's say 2007. Then there were less and less people.

I continue to write stories for you but also some other people who get the stories by email. And as long as I have ideas and fun to write I continue.

I hope that you will like the next parts of the story. I think that the duo Havu-Harri is perfect. I loved to write this fiction with them. You can take your time to write comments :D we are not in a rush.

that's a shame. i guess the forum will die some day...

You make me happy
no, not in a rush?? sure we are --> MORE!!!
it seems to be very, very interesting. i hope the story is not finished as soon as possible

No, don't worry. The story is longer than 5 pages

I'm very happy to make you happy.

I try to make it as interesting as possible... well like the other stories :D

Enjoy the new part!

ui, here we go...
I guess the woman has to spy Havu and Harri??? It just keeps getting more interesting.
hopefully Havu and Harri will not get in danger? my poor little Havu

hehehhe a bit of suspens

Some more.

I think for me it was the best in this chapter was, that janne converted to a girl
harri has to learn how to deal with young girls... he cannot be so rude to her

I wanted to add a bit of humour but not that it sounds ridiculous. I guess it worked

That's the difference between Harri and Havu. Harri is the technical, scientific person according importance to facts and Havu is more human and try to find globally a solution by understanding the causes and effects.

Here is a new part.

havu is clever- that's nothing new the others have to be careful- beware of havu
oh harri- afraid of a mosquito
just great

They are funny ^^

I've Internet problem at the moment (I'm writing from a public computer). My access should be fixed tomorrow. As soon as it is I add a new part. Sorry for the inconvenience.

no problem

Internet is back!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I just posted 2 new parts

amazing
please tell me that the gils will not drink THAT water!!!
maybe they shall have everything with them??

Wow! I'm so happy that you like it!
You'll see what happen next

Here is some more. Enjoy

sarah... she is so... I hope the guys will catch her

You know that you can write whatever you want-I like it forever. it is something other than this love story-ff
although there are beautiful and good stories...

Like I wrote once, I'm not good at writing love stories. I let it to more talented authors. I prefer drama, action, thriller and adventure. Everytime I've a new idea I try to build an "understandable" story with a beginning and a end. I did the mistake for my first fiction to post a new chapter everytime I finished to write one. It was a total disaster (in my point of view) even if people liked it...

Currently I'm writing the scenario of "Finnish stories: second part" (I still have to find the title).

Here is some more. Action!

"Finnish stories: second part"

but i guess the results will be not the only ones??

Yes And Havu as one of the 3 main characters

I post some more

thank you so much for this havu again as main character

and the drama beginns unbelievable that woman- sth wrong with her