Feedback: "Finnish stories: Broken Hearts"

Here is a new sample for you

In another building another couple was also signing documents. “Now you are wife and husband. You can kiss the bride,” the employee of the registry office said and the new happy couple did it.

thank you
arttu and his girlfriend?

That was too easy Or you are too good

great now i really can't wait for reading

I don't know when it will be ready

Have you watched the podium of the individual competition? Arttu was there ^^ He gave the awards and the yellow bib to Kofler. It was fun to see that he had to help the Austrian

what no i haven't... did you have it on video? or a link maybe or a pic
arttu

I just found this one: http://www.galeria.skijumping.pl/data/m ... iemela.jpg

oh thanks
he is so damn good looking maybe he will be in lahti?

He might be there. If yes, I will have to open my eyes not like last year

yes
you have to fulfill an order

Another sample to thank you for your patience.

“One of my friends died and I discovered that **********. My married neighbour is in love with one of my friends. This friend is under my responsibility because he can’t live by himself. When I’m not watching him he is doing bad things. My daughter doesn’t understand why we divorced and she accuses me. I guess that it’s a normal reaction but it’s stressful for me. In general my life is complicated. If I would write a book about it, people will think that it’s pure fiction,” Janne said with an ironic smile.

61 pages are written.

äh? havu is divorced

maybe you have an idea when winter comes to helsinki?? weather forecast...?

Yes he is. Again.

Well... I checked the weather till Dec 8th and there is still no snow and the temperatures are still positive. During the nights it's not very cold. Maybe -2....

because of nina i guess poor suvi

und ich habe mich so auf helsinki mit schnee gefreut

Yes, Nina is partly responsible of it

I think that the title of the last part will be "On the other side".

Apprently it's a black winter. All the Finns hope for the snow for Christmas. But in 2008/2009 winter it came only in January... Iltasanomat wrote that it will be warm till February... It's the warmest automn/winter since 50 years.

hate her. what is maria doing now... sorry, I meant ana

no.... sadly no snow

I know that you hate her And it's why I wrote a very horrible end of life for her I won't tell you what happens with Maria and Ana.

Snow can come in one night. Maybe you will see some. Fingers are crossed.

an horrible end for nina? great
hope that everything goes well with maria and ana maria and arttu... maybe a nice couple

thanks

Nice ideas Maybe you're right, maybe not.

I know, I'm bad and crazy