Feedback: "Finnish stories: Broken Hearts"

I still haven't decided of who will win. I just want to write a funny chapter. And I know that you like the Havu-Arttu chapters

I like all chapters but I prefer the havu-arttu-suvi-maria-ones

That's good. I still have a couple of chapters to write. Some are really important. And then I will have to check the order. Maybe some chapters should come earlier and some later. I will also check to don't have 3 chapters with Havu in a row for example. I like when it jumps from a character to another. Well, sometimes it's not possible. Katrina has a bigger role than in the other parts and Tiia smaller.

The chapter with the challenge between Havu and Arttu is finished

who's the winner?
please let the three chapters in a row with havu... this would be great

The winner is Arttu But Havu did well too. I read the 3 Havu chapters in a row and It's not a problem because is interacting with different characters in each.

I read the first 25 pages and I love them I hope you too. Tonight I dreamed of the end and now I've a clear view of how to end properly this saga. It will be a bit sad. I will kill one of the main characters

killing someone??? not arttu or havu!!

Maybe it's one of them Maybe not I will try to write this moment as emotional as possible. Let's see how it will be. But something is sure: I won't change "victim".

Edit: I wrote a bit of the end because I had a lot of ideas. Oh my God that was terrible. I was crying while I wrote. Here is a sample (one of the names replaced by letters is Havu ):

“XX! He needs help!” she begged with tears in her eyes. She couldn’t see anymore. She knew that she couldn’t help but she couldn’t accept it. “I can’t call an ambulance. It’s too late.” “No, it’s not! YY stay with me! Stay with me!” she repeated. “XX is right. It’s too late. You did your best. I have to go,” he said in a low voice. His hands were already cold and his face was pale. “No! You can’t leave me! You can’t leave YY! You have to fight!”

arttu is mr. x and havu is the person (yy) who died. right?
you are so unfair

I know. I'm a bad person and i make your favourites suffer a lot. And I'm extremely bad because I won't tell you if you guessed right or not Don't be mad

any questions?

oops. Looks bad for me

I have started many chapters and none is really finished. Now I'm writing one that you will probably like. The death of Nina

sounds good. can't wait for reading this one

yes, looks very bad for you but it could be better for you when you let havu and arttu alive. deal?

I knew that you were waiting for a long time for this chapter

Are you blackmailing me? Now I have to think of the consequences Should I kill Havu or Arttu or both finally Or will I be nice

This 8th chapter is the longest of the saga for sure. I've now 52 pages and the writing is not over. Last part was 56 pages long. I guess that I will be close to 70 pages

blackmailing? no, why? I don't know what you mean...

you should be nice to them

will read it...

I'd like to share it. The problem is that some chapters are not finished and I will probably moved some. I will try to hurry up a bit.

you have all the time but please no posting when I'm in helsinki...

I can also pause the posting and wait that you are back. you are my best reader and on this forum I don't know if anyone else is reading.

thank you
maybe the blackreaders

Ususally I post first here and then on my webpage. Some people are reading the fiction in the Word document I send by email.

good to know