Feedback: "Finnish stories: Broken Hearts"

Hello my dear readers!

I'm really happy to share the new chapter of the saga with you. The end is coming (in the next chapter that his "under construction") and I hope that you will enjoy the reading.

I'm really interested in reading your feedback positive or negative.

OMG! that's so great and exciting
a very good beginning

Oh thanks I'm so happy that you like it

Here is some more

I do not so really understand what tapio wants from havu but I will see and wait
i guess nina told maria the whole story??? poor havu he's alone now

Havu is kind of common element in the 3 "incidents". He knows the three "victims". Tapio wants to know if he is the responsible of it before to continue the investigation and look for another suspect.

Yep, Havu is in trouble. You'll see how it will continue.

I post the next part as soon as I'm back home.

you have time. coming late home from work

A surprise is waiting for you I will probably post another part later.

surprise??? where...
poor havu but i understand maria!
will see how she react

MORE!!!!!!

It's coming :D

irgendwie tut havu mir leid, aber an seiner situation ist er selber schuld

For sure If he want he can just say no.

A new part is coming.

wow, she's too good for him

Oh yes :)

Tell me if something is not clear of if you don't remember something.

And now the part with the master of law

not bad... very good. wenn arttu sich da mal nicht zu weit aus dem fenster lehnt

I liked to write this part. It was a mix between an interview and a quarrel but also a power fight. The lawyer vs the inspector. Who will win? There are other "fights" like this one in the story but not only with them.

Ready for a new part?

YES!!! Here we go?

OMG!! what is there?

Havu is not alone anymore to know what is in the basement.

And here is the last part of the first chapter with Arttu.

just can say: MORE!!!

I'm so happy!

So now, let's start with chapter number 2.

I don't like her!!!!